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Rinoa Heartilly Portrait by SangoxandxKirara Rinoa Heartilly Portrait by SangoxandxKirara
This is maybe my..... third? Attempt at realism ^^ I've been wanting to try an airbrushing realism picture. Her neck looks too short or her head looks too big, and her shoulders look a tad too narrow, but it's a start, right? Feedback is appreciated ^^

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PaintTool SAI
Wacom Bamboo Pen Tablet Size Small
MS Paint


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Rinoa Heartilly(C)Square Enix
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MarieJane67777 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Student General Artist
woah cool i thought it was paints, but its ott :|
great job
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SangoxandxKirara Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks, that really means a lot :D
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Manah-Angel-Eyes Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's looking good!
Though if you want to go for realism, the big eyes, simplified nose and pointy chin are too anime-ish
Unlesssss... you're going for a "semi anime+realism" style like FFVII Advent Children, like I did here [link] (it's reaaally old and ugly... and I gave up on realism now... XD; )

The picture is also quite blurry, so I suggest you work with sharper lines and sharper, darker shadows

As for colors, her skin is very white and needs to be darkened a bit: the color of the SHADING is better for the BASE color (the bright area of skin in your drawing)
As for shading itself, it needs to be alot darker than the base color, t's very hard to see her nose right now: contrasts are important!

White skin and white background are also very rough for the eyes, I recommend a neutral colored background like grey or a mild color (like... dull dark green or blue, never neon colors like cyan or bright red!)
Mild, dark colors put the focus on the character and make it easier to see the features of said character

I hope the feedback helps a bit :3
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SangoxandxKirara Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks ^^ And the critique really helps :D
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Manah-Angel-Eyes Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad I could help ^^
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SangoxandxKirara Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Student General Artist
:D
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